This doesn't look right.
Yet even with the rough construction, and way too low neckline and armhole, you can see the silhouette coming through.
I'm going back to the drafting table and will lengthen the body to raise the neckline and armhole 1 1/2 inches. Maybe 1 3/4. The bottom center front looks like it could be lengthened just a bit too. Hooray for mock-ups.